Friday, 4 March 2016

2nd narrative writing

Walt: Included language features.

As I looked behind me something began to move. It was a girl and she look strange, I walked to her to say hi. I introduce myself and said, “hi my name is Addy”. The girl said, my “name is Annabelle” with scary, ghost sort of voice. I was so scared I ran and ran until I got to my friend house. When I saw her I dragged her into her room and told her about the girl. I acted out what happened and she told me something very important. She said, “nobody has ever talked to her because they say that whoever does will be haunted”. Now I was scared forever. I said, “what happen to her and Ella” (my friend) said, “she was angry and she was going for a hike in the woods and got lost, I started calling my mom, I said to my mum I was so scared but my mum wouldn't believe that Annabelle would haunted me……………………..

This week we did narrative writing, We made our own docs and wrote our narrative write. We used language features to make our writing more interesting. I like doing narrative writing because you get to make your own character and make up your own things.


  1. It's great to see you enjoy making up stories for your narrative writing Htet htet.


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