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Thursday 22 October 2015

San Diego zoo

WALT: Think about my purpose and reader by planning my recount.


Plan of my paragraph topics
1. Introduction
Orientates and hooks
2. Body Paragraph 1
talk about san diego zoo
3. Body Paragraph 2
visiting the animals on online and watching the san diego zoo animals videos.
4. Body Paragraph 3
talk about how awesome is the zoo and animals.
5. Conclusion
What I think about the San Diego Zoo

When our teacher said we are learning about the San Diego zoo I was so excited and I
thought we are going to the zoo. Then our teacher mr goodwin said, we are going to
learn about the San Diego zoo on online. We are not happy and disappointed.

Introduction Rubric
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HookMy introduction is boring.
It is difficult to read.
My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.
OrientationMy introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.My audience is clear what I am writing about.My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.
This is fun doing this writing and I watch a lot of video about San Diego zoo animals. I enjoy doing this writing. I want to do this writing in the future.  

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