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Wednesday, 24 August 2016

Cross country (show not tell)

P1: My lungs were filled with air and my legs started to wiggle like jelly. As Mr Burt slam the 2 block the year 7 girls started to sprint like a cheetah.


P2: I started gasping all the air,I was so puffed because I pushed myself into the limit.My lungs started to burn like fire.