Persuasive writing

Kids should get paid to go to school.

Do you think kids should get paid to go to school? I think kids should get paid to go to school because for some kids, they don’t have lunch because their parents don't have time to make lunch.

I hope that you agree with me because lots of kids in New Zealand struggles with money and that’s not a good thing. Kids should get paid at least half the money that teachers do because

the teachers couldn’t get paid unless the students were learning and coming to school every single day.

Another reason why kids should get paid to go to school is that kids will be more excited for school and finish their work on time. They’ll want to go to school early as they can and they would work their hardest knowing that they would get paid for it.

I think that kids should get paid to go to school, so some kids can actually have lunch and they would be excited for school everyday.

This week for writing, we did persuasive writing. Here's my writing that I've wrote.

Think-board

This week my maths class have been focusing on decimals.This is a think-board
that I had finished for this week.

Our trade fair

Walt: use language that paints a picture in the minds of our reader.

Trade and enterprise is about our business groups. Our goal is to take as many orders we can to make money for our product.  We have different business groups with different product that we are selling. If people walk by our mission is to make them feel like they need this product. Trade and enterprise is also known as our topic for term three.

Years 5 and 6 are learning about trade and enterprise and how to use money. The teachers are give us money, for example Mr g\Goodwin give me 1 pt and 50 pieces 1 pt like $1.00 and 50 pieces like 50 cents and we have our own internet bank then after school or at lunch time we can bank our pt and pieces and we got

bank teller. The teacher don’t always give us cash, they put it in our bank.

There are many business group there are home ware, toys, music, custom stationery, kitchen and jewellery. I'm in home ware,  in our group there are 5 people in our group and we are making skull candles and orange candles.

The big skull candles is 1 pt and the small skull candles is 50 pieces and the orange candle is 50 pieces and

if you buy the big skull candles you get buy 1 get 1 free.

when we are at the trade fair we split up 3 people stay and wait for people to order 1 of us go to order and buy

some food,loom headphone or other thing. The people go and order, they have 15 minutes to buy or order. When

it’s 15 minutes and we switch again. When we got our product the teacher take out from our internet bank.

I wonder what it’s gonna like on market day and miss Lavakula said in our business group if we make the

most order Miss Lavakula will give us price. I can’t wait to market day.

The week we are learning about our trade fair and pt and pieces. Pt and pieces are money, pt is dollar and pieces are the cents. At week 8 we are selling our product before week 8 the people 
order our product and then miss lavakula take out the pt and pieces in the people order our 
product but until we give the our product to them.