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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Friday, 27 October 2017

How to be a good role model

Good role models are everywhere around us, they usually help us with our work. We can talk to them about stuff that we are uncomfortable with and we can take notes and lessons from them about how to be a good role model.

The 1st way to be a good role model is to behave and do appropriate things in front of kids. If you do any rude or cheeky stuff in front of them, they’ll just copy you. That means you’re not being a good role model.

The 2nd way to be a good role model is to respect others and treat them the way you want to be treated. If you treat them with no respect then they will treat you the same way you treated them.

To wrap it off, you make sure that the words that come out of your mouth are kind and appropriate. If you say kind and appropriate stuff then your mind will start becoming positive.

For conclusion, I think that we just need to behave and do appropriate stuff in front of kids. Reason being is because, they are the future of our next generation and what they learn from us now, they’ll teach and show to those around them.

For our first week of school we started off with a explanation writing. 

Wednesday, 6 September 2017

Take Flight

WALT: Engage our readers by using precise language

I was travelling in the 'Radio-Flyer; when all of a sudden my grandpa and I were in a jungle. There were black monkeys with purple eyes that were screeching at us.  Long scaley alligators were all around us searching for  food. For a moment I wondered if we were going to be their next meal. Slowly, grandpa and I realised that the alligators were coming towards us, their long jaws snapping hungrily. My grandpa and I tried to escape but there was no way out of the jungle. Wherever we went, there were  deadly animals chasing us like they wanted to rip our skin off. Eventually, we came to a clearing and the animals were all gone. I guess they found a better meal with better protein!!!
This week, we're focusing on using precise language in our writing. Up above, is my
writing about the Radio - Flyer and there's a video you can watch. Hope you enjoy!!

Wednesday, 31 May 2017

Our year 8 leadership camp

WALT: write a recount
It’s that time of the year again, Year 8 camp. Every year, the year 8's would go on camp and this year, year 8’s went to Kauaeranga valley in Thames. We all piled into buses and went on with our trip.

While at camp we did a lot of activities my most challenging activity was railway jigger. I jumped on the jigger and started pumping my arm. It was harder than I thought, my arm started burning inside and I could feel the flax going past my face.

I could taste my dry mouth while I was pushing my jigger and I could feel my dry lips. Nearly every students struggled to push their jiggers around the corner, even the teachers.  

Finally it had come to the end and everyone was tired and thirsty. When they all got off their jiggers, everyone fell to the ground and started moaning about how tired they were.    

Last week, the year 8's went on camp and the year 7's had to stay at school. At camp, the year 8's had lots of fun and of course we had lots of leadership opportunities and the year 7's had lots of time to build each other up. 

Friday, 19 May 2017

Simple sentences, Compound sentences and Complex sentences

WALT:Identify and use simple,compound and complex sentences. \
This week I've been learning about Simple sentences, Compound sentences
and Complex sentences. This presentation explain what is Simple sentences,
Compound sentences and Complex sentences.

Thursday, 18 May 2017

Simple sentences, Compound sentences and Complex sentences


This week we were learning about Complex sentences, Compound sentences and Simple sentences. This is my 9 sentence story I wrote. It has 3 compound, 3 complex and 3 simple sentences in it. I hope you enjoyed reading it.


There once was a girl called Daniella. She was the only child in her family and she was so spoiled. She lived with her parents. Lots of people called her a spoiled brat but  Daniella wasn’t a brat. She had lots of friends at school but some of them left because their families moved out of town,

Daniella had a tough time at school because some people would tease her. One day daniella was very sick and she had to stay home.While she was at home someone kept  phoning her and hanging up. Daniella got really angry so she threw her phone away.



Wednesday, 24 August 2016

Cross country (show not tell)

P1: My lungs were filled with air and my legs started to wiggle like jelly. As Mr Burt slam the 2 block the year 7 girls started to sprint like a cheetah.


P2: I started gasping all the air,I was so puffed because I pushed myself into the limit.My lungs started to burn like fire.

Monday, 27 June 2016

Neison fusion brainstrom

Walt: Brainstorm and unpack ideas from a performance                                                                   
This week,I have to do a brainstorm about neison fusion performance.
First,I have to watch the neison fusion movie and unpack the ideas 
from the movie to the brainstorm.

Wednesday, 25 May 2016

Johnny Angel Padlet

Walt:Extend writing using descriptive detailed vocabulary and sentences for a magazine article.\
 
     
     Today we are finishing off our Johnny Angel's Pad-let,we have to unpack our thoughts about Johnny Angel's art work. 

Monday, 16 May 2016

I luminate brainstorm

Walt:Reflect and respond on key features and points of a performance or assembly presentation


Today I'm doing a brainstorm about I luminate, They came to our school last week and 
the whole school enjoy watching them dancing.