Narrative writing

In 2000, there were two girls but one of them were rich and one of them were poor. Their names were Jessica and Ella.

Jessica was amazingly rich but Ella wasn’t. In Jessica’s life she had everything that she’d ever wished for, she had ten times better things than what normal kids had.

But in Ella’s life, she wasn’t rich like Jessica she was just a kid that didn’t have no money no nothing. She tried to find a job but she had no luck finding one. So Ella was off trying to find a job the next day until she found a penny and that penny had brought good luck to Ella she had found a job just like that.

Ella enjoyed living with her friend Emily they both moved to california where Jessica had lived so that if Ella and Emily were in need of help they could just go and visit Jessica if they were in det of their bills water food or anything Jessica was like a sister to Emily and Ella jessica was really helpful.

So they lived a happy life together and they were living a dream.

This week, my literacy class have been writing about their stories. Here's my writing that I've finished.

Narrative writing

There were three beautiful sisters who lived with their mom and dad. The eldest name is Ellie, The middle aged one is Zoe and the youngest ones name is Sophia. They once lived in

Mandalay but they moved to the city yangon. Their mom and dad were very rich,sometimes the girls waste their money for the malls,going to trip and dance classes.

Ellie is 23 years old,Zoe is 21 and Sophia is 19 years old.The girls were like best friends.

Ellie loves to go to the malls,Zoe loves going on trips and Sophia love to dance.

Sometimes sophia has 4 dance classes on one day. One day,Zoe told her mom,dad

And her sisters that she is going on a trip to Bago. The next day Zoe was waiting at the

Airport,5 minutes after the planes had come,so Zoe got up to planes.

About a week later,Zoe called her parents that she coming back but not with planes with her car and her parents were very happy that she is coming back but her parents were worried because the roads were fixing .On the way Zoe had an car accident,The ambulance came

The road that zoe had her car accident,they called Zoe mum and dad. Zoe mum and dad came to Bago hospital fast as they can but when they came they were too late because Zoe

Had already past away. Zoe mum and dad were very sad that zoe had past away.Zoe mum had a heart attack but no one know only the dad.When Zoe mum saw Zoe, she past away too.Dad who lived with a very sad life.