2nd narrative writing

Walt: Included language features.

As I looked behind me something began to move. It was a girl and she look strange, I walked to her to say hi. I introduce myself and said, “hi my name is Addy”. The girl said, my “name is Annabelle” with scary, ghost sort of voice. I was so scared I ran and ran until I got to my friend house. When I saw her I dragged her into her room and told her about the girl. I acted out what happened and she told me something very important. She said, “nobody has ever talked to her because they say that whoever does will be haunted”. Now I was scared forever. I said, “what happen to her and Ella” (my friend) said, “she was angry and she was going for a hike in the woods and got lost, I started calling my mom, I said to my mum I was so scared but my mum wouldn't believe that Annabelle would haunted me……………………..

This week we did narrative writing, We made our own docs and wrote our narrative write. We used language features to make our writing more interesting. I like doing narrative writing because you get to make your own character and make up your own things.

De-construct and Re - craft

Walt: de-construct, and re-craft our paragraphs so they are more interesting for our readers.

This week we were learning about re-crafting and de-constructing.
We re-craft the boring text and make it more interesting, de-construct means
breaking all a part and re-crafting means putting all together and making more interesting.

2015 reflection

WALT: Write a quality reflection that shares what you gained from 2015 and what you are looking forward to accomplishing in 2016

It’s 2016,last year my favourite activity going on camp and It’s was lot of fun.

Last year we did the fear factor, everybody was scared and excited about the

fear factor challenge. We did lots of fun things and everyone was

having lots of fun.

This year my goals is work hard at writing, reading and maths.

Christmas gif

WALT: Make our own gif.
Today we have made a Christmas
gif. It was fun and creative.

Years 6 camp recount

WALT: Summarise a week long experience into a recount.

This story is all about years 6 campers. We went to Camp Bentzon on Kawau Island. Kawau Island is the most beautiful place I have seen in the North Island

in my life. Everyone was very excited and very happy about going to camp.

There were four different groups and they were Bentzon, Mansion,Kawau and Catz. In each group there was a’s and b’s, each group had two leaders, a girl and a boy. I was in Bentzon A and in my group my leaders were Talita and Hosea. Some of my favorite subject on Camp Bentzon was kayaking, raft building and confidence course.

The first thing, we did was sailing and  my partner was Talita. First when Talita and I got into the water, I was scared. When we came back from the sailing it was morning tea and we had some cookies. Our next activity was the confidence course, at confidence course we needed to be as dry as we could.

Before we had dinner each group needed to set tables everyday. First night we watched camp movies.On second night we played spotlight and it was a lot of fun. It was the best night in my life. The next night it was the concert night and bentzon performed school ambassadors. We came second with catz on the concert night. mansion came first and kawau came third.

On the last day, Mr Goodwin said, we were playing volleyball. It was Bentzon A vs Mansion A. Then we played, bush baseball, then touch and swimming. Then

we packed up our suitcases and bags and then we put them in a room. We waited for the ferry to come and we stopped at the sandspit and we unloaded our bags and suitcases from the ferry. Then we put our gear on the bus and we had our yummy lunch. After we had our lunch, we jumped on the bus and when everyone got on the bus. Everyone was very tired. We got to school and we unloaded the bags and suitcase from the bus. Everyone took their bags and suitcases and went home.   

This week we are writing our camp recount. I hope in the future I can write more recount like this.  

             

Maths problem solving week-1

WALT: Find a fractions of a number.


 This week I have learnt about fractions. I hope I can learn this in the future.

Find a fractions of a number

WALT: Find a fractions of a number.


I learnt this week about fractions. I solved maths fractions and I hope I can
learn more maths problem solving like this in the future.