Narrative writing

In 2000, there were two girls but one of them were rich and one of them were poor. Their names were Jessica and Ella.

Jessica was amazingly rich but Ella wasn’t. In Jessica’s life she had everything that she’d ever wished for, she had ten times better things than what normal kids had.

But in Ella’s life, she wasn’t rich like Jessica she was just a kid that didn’t have no money no nothing. She tried to find a job but she had no luck finding one. So Ella was off trying to find a job the next day until she found a penny and that penny had brought good luck to Ella she had found a job just like that.

Ella enjoyed living with her friend Emily they both moved to california where Jessica had lived so that if Ella and Emily were in need of help they could just go and visit Jessica if they were in det of their bills water food or anything Jessica was like a sister to Emily and Ella jessica was really helpful.

So they lived a happy life together and they were living a dream.

This week, my literacy class have been writing about their stories. Here's my writing that I've finished.